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Perspective mistakes are relatively easy to spot. Just take a ruler, extend the lines you drew, and see which lines are off.

A rhythm, flow, or a gesture is a line that connects objects in a drawing. We can use S curves, C curves, or Straight lines as rhythms. Finding the flow in a pose can be hard because it's an abstract concept that we cant see. But it is the most fundamental aspect in figure drawing. Flow exists in EVERYTHING. In trees, buildings, water, etc. It is our job as artists to find these rhythms and design them to be visually appealing and truthful to nature. In figure drawing, all aspects should be connected in a unified whole. In my drawing, you can flow from any part of the body to another. For example, you can go down the neck, around the arm, and into the wrist. Or you can start from the wrist , flow up the arm, go down the rib cage and flow all the way down to the toes. HOW TO PRACTICE 1) Watch a tutorial on it. [Aside from proko: Tim Gula is amazing (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SvB3bnj63oc), Mike Mattesi (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NAfTHWEKx2A)]. Absorb the information as much as possible. Watch it as many times as you need to. And most importantly follow along. Don't just passively listen, but try to analyze the figure. 2) Draw the figure on your own and try to find and analyze the rhythms. This is the hardest but most important part, this is where majority of the learning happens. You can also draw the figure multiple times to experiment which type of rhythm to use C, S, or I. 3) Get feedback from an outside source. Or you can analyze it yourself by comparing your drawings with those mentioned above and see where the differences lie, where you can improve etc. 4) Take a mental note of the critique you receive and keep it in the back of your head during your next session so that you don't repeat it. 5) Repeat from step 1 until you master it.

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Gesture is really hard cause it's simplifying the figure into it's most basic elements; often simplification is harder than making things look complicated. This is kinda depressing to say, but depending on how fast you learn, your first few hundred gestures will be bad. I know it seems kinda crushing but like Marshall said in the gesture critique video you just gotta power through them. Studying only gesture for a month is definitely sufficient. You should move onto the bean. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VFB7deiL-3s&t=325s. As Stan says in this video, if you wait before you master a topic till you move onto the next you're gonna be doing gesture for 10 years. You should not wait till you fully master gesture cause that will just take too long. Even if you don't completely grasp the current topic, you should move onto the next. The course is designed so that the previous topic builds on the next, practicing the bean will improve your gestures significantly. I know it did that for me. Good luck with your practice.

Some of these boxes and cylinders are looking a bit off to me. I think you should work a bit on your perspective.

Here again. This last week was not it, but today's gestures make me hopeful of a turnaround. Let me know what I can improve on. (Source: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lzEw6ynDkvQ) Side note: I started a new sketchbook, one with recycled paper, and I don't really like it. It's slightly tinted brown which I don't really care about, but it's weight is slightly less than my previous, and so I can't draw on both sides of the pages (you can see my previous drawings through it, even with pencil). In addition, it has a tooth that seems to eat at my pencil so much that I sharpen it every couple of pages compared to rarely before. Well I guess it's better to know than not :/

Hey I'd like to say good job on these drawings, there's a lot of variety to your subject matter and I see a mix of sketching and study work which is good. But I can tell you're new to asking for critique because this is not the most efficient way to do it. When asking for critique you should state the goal of your drawings very clearly and ask for feedback on certain aspects. Take your first portrait for example, I could give feedback on the shape design, anatomy, proportions, shading, accuracy, hair, line quality, etc. So next time you ask for feedback, state what your goal was for the drawing and request for critique on THAT specific aspect. For my critique, I'll be focusing on your first portrait. The largest issues I see are the planes of the head and shading. You don't really have a good understanding of the planes of the head. The drawing is feeling quite structural which I like, you have somewhat of an understanding of the different planes but I feel like there are still some gaps in your knowledge. For example, in the left cheek you indicated a top plane and front plane. But the front plane is filled in with the same half tone which is incorrect. The cheek kind of wraps around the face, so the plane furthest from the light source is shaded dark (which you did correctly) but Im not seeing any gradation as the cheek turns towards the nose. You captured this gradation successfully in the forehead but failed to notice it for the left cheek. For the top plane you indicated, there should be a shadow on the left side as the cheekbone turns towards the right ear (away from the light source). I used the left cheek as an example of incorrect shading but it can really be applied to every feature in your drawing. To improve your shading, Dorian Iten has great videos on the Proko channel. I also recommend you study the planes of the head using the Asaro Head. https://www.artstation.com/artwork/GX3Ax1 That being said, even though you missed certain aspects the drawing still feels structural. There's a clear separation of lights and dark. And finally, you're using the correct tone to indicate and add to that structure which is really good. Edit: the image is really low res for some reason. Open the image, click the three dots on the top right and click open original.

I am learning a lot of new things all at once and want to make sure I am setting myself up for success. I want to start practicing the overhand grip that Stan uses in the gesture drawing lessons of figure drawing fundamentals. My question is what is his set up exactly? Table top? 45 degree or 90 degree easel set up? I don't own any kind of drawing board or easel and want to make sure I pick up the correct supplies to best practice both the overhand grip and gesture. Thanks in advance for any info! (Posting again so I can mark it asked for help)