Hi @kip, nice studies! I attached an image with some practice tips. I think this is the most important advice I can give you at the moment. They helped me a lot when I took the course. If you practice a lot and with those tips in mind I think you'll be able to improve fast and find the answers to many of your questions on your own. Hope this helps :)

Nice gestures. You've got some nice line quality. Regarding fluidity - it looks to me like you're keying in on the "bumps" of the model too much - try to focus on the larger rythm instead of the contours.