These were both before watching the demo. I think I'll try the camel now that I have watched the demo and see if I can improve my line quality some. I think I get hung up on trying to match the image more than I am focusing on clean, confident lines, so I will keep that in mind next round.

My first attempt was the banana, and the after watching the demo I tried to do the pear. I only had one hardness of pencil so the values were tricky, but I think I was able to improve between the two attempts.