@happypiqueon I like a lot of these gestures. In terms of capturing the movement while also creating a legible pose, I think you did a great job of that. In terms of simplifying you nailed it. Your Lines of action are excellent. I am not even going to be picky here, because the gesture is just the initial blueprint, which will continue to get developed as the drawing goes on. From here you'd go on to add structure/form, and then onto adding the anatomy.