Add some explanations to the ratings, would love to see whether I miss anything

Finally submitted the assignment before the deadline! This was way harder than Peter's straight-line practice! I’ve noticed that when I focus less on the tip of my pencil and more on the overall path of the line, the result tends to be straighter and smoother. Interestingly, my second attempt (on the right) looks worse than my first attempt (on the left). This also happens with Peter's straight-line practice, and I’m not sure why. It can be a bit discouraging to see things getting worse instead of improving lol.

This is definitely harder than I expected. For what I did, feel some part is off but don't know what it is. Help is appreciated

Followed the example first, and then did this one myself