Hey Marco, Lets look at the top example. The bottom plane of the nose is barely visible on the model compared to the shadow indicated in your drawing. Tightening that up would really give the drawing more of a likeness. Looking at the left shoulder you can see that there is quite some distance from the pink shirt (almost parallel) to the where the hair falls behind her. Stretch out that shoulder a bit. A common question i ask myself is: Does this look like my subject? we typically lean to a yes or no rather quickly. Among all the things everyone tell us, i find distance relationships really helpful. ie. Does the ear line up to where the shoulder is? does the center line match? etc Often times when we see photos...the photos make things look a bit..off. Looking at photo of the model. i cant help to think how large the neck just looks in the photo which is fine...that's where artistic decisions are made. I like how you did this on the bottom reference. in me eyes..the way you shaped the back muscles are more pleasing. Good job there.

Hey @Denat. Adding tones and shadows would really make your drawing pop and add dimension to it. The drawing has some good line work, however, what could really give it more character is varying your line weight. For example a lighter line weight around the abdominal area - also areas where the human body retains fat.