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Justyna
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4yr
added comment inCaricature critique
I just wanted to say that I love the teeth!
Justyna
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4yr
Love it. And I really like the 'floating head' effect. But if you want to finish it then I suppose that you can ask your boyfriend to pose or - if he's to impatient - make a photo of him. Or you can just find a photo of a guy who stands in a similair position and use it as a point of reference for the shoulders and shirt.
Justyna
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4yr
For me the whole face looks flat - it needs a little bit more shadowing. And I think that you should work on the eyes. They do not look alive (and you probably forgot about the eyelashes). If you put a more contrast in the area of the eyes, they would become the focal point of the picture. I think that it would make the work better, because at the moment, the most contrasting elements are the background and the hair. Because of that the viewer concetrates on the hair and it kills the atmosphere. So I would darken the pupil (a lot) and the background (a little) and see what happens ;)
In a nutshell - the rule is that most important element should have the most contrast in it.
I think that it's how it looks in the picture and you draw what you saw, but I would put a little twist to it so that it would look a little bit more artistic ;)
But overall I like this work very much. It just need a little bit of refining and it will be great. Now it's just awesome :)
Justyna
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4yr
Awesome. I keep getting errors on the new page but hopefully it will be resolved soon. I was actually planning on buying the figure fundamentals for quite a while now, so I think that might be the good moment to do it. Will there be any discounts because of the launch?