2024/9/20. Good morning everybody. Following the instructions and advices that Brent gave me in his critique video I tried to leave more room to the experimentation. I made my pencils run much more and the lines look to me more natural and spontaneus, with lot of pentimento that make the figure a little bit messy. Since this is an exercise and not a final work maybe it’s not so important now. By time and confidence my strokes will get cleaner. Thanks and have a nice weekend!!