Value Study 1: John J Park, looking for critique and feedback
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Prathamesh Pagare
Here's a quick value study I did of John J Park's artwork. The instructions I had received: Use 5 or less than 5 values, look for curves, straights, patterns and other design elements. I was not supposed to render anything so I tried not to do that. Which areas can I improve upon? Thank you
Here's another one I did. It took me about 30 mins though. I should definitely try to speed things up. Thanks everyone for your help, I'll keep updating this thread with new studies when I do them. (the aim is 100s as @Luigi Manese suggested, haha)
Hey Prathamesh,
So I generally think this is looking pretty good with a nice separation of foreground and middle ground. I personally would make sure that I make well-defined shapes and that I filled out every shape completely instead of having white/bare spots that aren't meant to be there. (There are a few in your horses). The reason for this is to train discipline and clarity in communication.
If it doesn't make sense you are more than welcome to ask for a clarification 😁
Asked for help
Here's another study I did today, using 2 values as @Lili recommended, so it's monochromatic. I do not know the movie name, but I found it off a reference website and it looked nice. I'm not sure how to analyze this properly, I just liked the lighting and subjects. All I could say is there were big, obvious shapes to the left and clutter below which definitely falls in the light family, and there's a distinct line that separates the 2, the area in the right is far darker.
What would be a better analysis? Or is this just a bad ref? Any other tips / critique? Thank you!
Hi, I liked your written analises, but I think you got a bit lost in detail. I would suggest more attention to the shapes and simplification. Also the proportioins and placement of the soldiers are a bit off. I played a little with your painting to simplify and make the soldiers pop more. I don't know if you tried this exercise before. For what I've tried, it is best to start with only two values, then tree and then five. Hope this helps =D