Suggestions and Corrections for this pencil drawing
11mo
Caleb Arias
Hello everyone
6 months ago, I made this drawing, and I want to know what details I can improve on (Composition, Shading, Character Design, etc.)
It's actually my first framed drawing, so I'm excited about the result.
I was inspired by artists like Hiroaki Samura (Whose art with pencil and charcoal is sublime [when he is healthy.__.]
Shaun Friend, which is more comfortable for me to study
And a little James Jean
Hey Caleb, this is very nice work, I love the composition and it's overall very interesting. My biggest suggestion (and this is personal preference of style) but I would sharpen some line-work and add hard edges to the lions legs and to the arms of the subjects in mid ground so they stand out more and don't mesh with the background guy. I would also darken your shadows and add a wider range of contrast. Your hands and poses are great, don't be afraid to darken the lines a bit to show them off!
