some procreate painting I made
5mo
Dennis Yeary
looking for a critique on these
@Dennis Yeary
I especially like the one on the right. The water effect and blurred background create a great atmosphere.
In comparison, the bridge on the left doesn't work as well for me. The shapes and forms are hard to differentiate. Maybe you could try the same scene from another perspective, looking more down on the bridge?
The forest scene in the middle lacks a focal point. Perhaps you could add an item or plant to catch the viewer's eye, and refine the trees in the midground. Where should the viewer look? What path should we follow?
I hope this helps.
To improve the composition, I find it useful to create different thumbnails to figure out which perspective works best. What do you like about the images? Did you achieve what you intended? Is there something you hesitated to do due to fear?
I hope to see more of your tree and forest paintings. Keep practicing—I like your work!