Proko beginner's course imagination sketch feedback request
3mo
Christopher Lebreault
Hey! Here is my 2nd attempt at this assignment (technicality 2nd and 3rd) I am having difficulty grasping the "messy" line part of this project. I draw through, look for rhythms and shapes, etc. but I have a strong habit of drawing "clean lines" if I see a mistake (line not where they are supposed to go or got a shape wrong, a proportion error I noticed) I will go in and correct it. Maybe I am misunderstanding and my sketches are what the assignment is looking for or perhaps I am not getting something.
the first two rabbit pages are studying refs, the 3rd is exploring and the last rabbit is my final. the two jackal pages are self-explanatory. In this assignment, I tried my hardest to be messy/exploratory and not concerned with rightness so I included a "sketch" I did while having fun with level 1 to show what my usual sketches look like
(I posted this exact thing in the class's comment section but I find it not very active very often SO I am here as well)
I like your cartoony style and the poses for the rabbits.
You do need to loosen up, or your drawings will end up stiff. As we add details and a nice line around our sketches, they tend to stiffen up, This is why loosening up and pushing the gesture can give our drawings a better chance of not being stiff.
I did a couple of sketches to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)
@Steve Lenze thanknyou for your feedback! I took your advice and tried to implement it here. He feels slightly off balance but much better than my previous attempt
