Marvel pencilling
1yr
James Zahra
These were posted to the assignments page before deadline
Thoughts?
Hey James,
This is pretty nice, The story looks pretty good, I can tell what's happening.
I did want to show you some drawing issues that I noticed:
Panel 1 page 1- woman's arm is tangent with the panel border.
Panel 4 page 2- Spiderman's arm doesn't look like it originates from the right place.
Panel 5 page 2- Spiderman's anatomy is a little off.
Panels 1,2,3 page 3- anatomy issues
Panel 1 page 4- anatomy and structure problems.
I did some sketches to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)
Hey thank you very much for the critique it’s amazing how difficult this sort of thing is when there’s so much to juggle like storytelling pumping out poses from imagination and trying to put it all together. Sometimes the fundamentals escape you, even things like anatomy. I agree with everything you’re saying and will take it all on board. Just gotta keep grinding
