Looking for critiques 1part
3yr
Lord
Your lines are really clean!
i think you should work on your proportions, you tend to make the pelvis too big and the head too small.
there are some drawings (2,4,5,9,10) where the angle of the ribcage looks like it’s pointing in a different direction than the rest of the pose. Remember that the curve of center of the ribcage follows the curve of the spine exactly.
practicing dividing planes into equal part sun perspective and drawing contour lines on shapes could help with this.
please let me know if you have questions!