Looking for critique again :)
3yr
Jo Edgehill
Hi! I'm back with a more lazy, practice drawing. I wanted to redraw a sketch from 2019,and I hope it turned out a bit better :) Please give me your opinion on her! Thank you!!
I did a real quick draw over but I feel like your lacking 3d or are struggling with them, everything feels very flat try to think you are going over someones are like if you were to run a pen over your friends arm. doing some basic cylinder studies will help greatly to make you think more in 3d space. just keep on going and never be hard on yourself
Thank you for the draw over!! It definitely helped me see my mistakes. I'll remember this in my next drawing. Again , thank you so much!! :)
Well, the character design looks nice, the rendering of the face works really well with the style you are striving, but it feels disconected with the rest of the body, which has shadows with low contrast and leaves ambiguity to the forms. The line quality also looks less refined than the ones used in the head. That's the main thing that comes to mind, but it certainly turned out better, so good improvement there!
I can definitely see what you mean. I'll try to clean up some of the lines so that it's more cohesive. Thank you so much for your critique! :)
