I got stuck here- please help me out.
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Tom Romaniuk
Hi guys! I need your help. Feedback and critique. I believe that any kind of help will help me. I got stuck in this phase of my drawing/ painting. Something is missing. Yet I cannot put a finger on it. What would you change? Add?
Thank you very much
Based on your feedbacks. I upgraded it. I Made several different attempts, spent hours on them and many of them re- painted. And threw away:P And ended up here. What is your honest feedback?!🙏🤔💪 thank you
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Hey Tom! I like what you have going on here! What immediately jumps out to me is the value of the foreground, middle ground, and background are all very close together which flattens the distance you're creating in the composition. If you squint down the Tree seems to float in the center because it's the darkest element, but the surrounding elements all kind of fuse together without much separation. Pushing the values of the foreground, midground, and background further apart will exaggerate the atmospheric perspective you're creating and connect the tree to the foreground a bit. Desaturating your painting and looking only at the values helps diagnose where you can separate your values further! Hope this helps, keep up the good work!
Hey. Coool! Love your contribution to my work. Thanks a lot. Yes. When taking a step behind and some distance from my work I start to understand together with your feedback. I have edited it already. Hoping it is nicer to look at. And more correct. Yet to be honest, i am not happy with lines. Its too cartoony, less artistic, less expressive. I have some serious understanding of perspective there going on, form- a drawing part. I feel there in my own water. But adding colours, rendering and keep it expressive with rough brush strokes, and still be able to communicate elements of the scene like stones bushes, i find myself in unknown waters... what to do about it? I just feel like I keep doing the same things over and over again expecting different outcome. Thank you so much!
