Girl portrait, let me know your feedback and critiques!
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Marco Fornaciari
Digital portrait i did recently, any opinion or feedback is welcome.
Thanks you so much!
Looks awesome! You did the face expression so well! The first thing that I think when I look at it is that I really wish there was some sort of story like a book or show with this art incorporated into it, idk what it is about it but you gave it such character and such a feel! Love it!! I really think its the nose and mouth it almost looks like an over exaggerated kinda thing, almost slight cartoon like proportions and where things are positioned in the nose and mouth that gives it such character! I'm really looking forward to more of your art and def got a follow from me!
Hey Marco! This is absolutely stunning!! You did an amazing job, that's for sure. However, there are a couple of minor details that I would adjust. This is just my own interpretation, and I don't have the reference so you can take it or simply ignore it.
First, I would blur the shadow area much more. You can even blend the edge of the face with the bg so you can bring more focus to the light area and push even more the point of interest for the image. Just like you did with the hair in shadow.
The ear placement seemed a bit off for me, I'm probably wrong but I don't feel like her head is so angled up so the ear goes that low. But again, I don't have the reference and you did, so I'm probably wrong.
I'd also add a tiny highlight on the edge of the eye socket. It usally works pretty well, but this is just me making it up cause, again, I don't have the ref.
I added a quick paintover so you could see my points more easily!! I hope this was helpful, and if not, well it was fun for me!! haha
Anyways, you absolutely nailed it mate, keep up the good work!!