Finished colour pages
4yr
Serena Marenco
A couple of months ago I asked you for help with the composition of some pages.
Thank you very much, the result was far beyond my expectations.
Over the next few days I will bore you with new storyboards since your help with these pages has been so valuable and useful!
Thank you very much, it's nice to have a community to ask for advice! <3
Great work! Love the atmosphere and the rhythm!
I just noticed almost of your figures are looking to the right!
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These look great!
I really like how we're woven into the story in the first page with the establishing shots, and I absolutely love the build-up in the last 3 pages where the horse comes back up and the overall paintings are beautiful.
Thinking about what @Yiming Wu said - perhaps adding another page between 2 and 3 with some establishing shots for the flashback and starting with a panel from the present would help visually strengthen the connection?
Lovely! Are these continuous or segmented? To me the colour doesn't bridge very naturally between image 2 and 3 but maybe there's more stuff in-between XD. Is this a web comic or something?
Yes, it is a flashback.
Usually in flashbacks I make the edges of the vignettes blurred rather than defined (these are pages 135 to 142).
Since I don't write the script I don't have the power to add or remove pages, sometimes I can negotiate some changes but the writer has very clear ideas ^^;
It is a webcomic, it is on different platforms such as Webtoon and Tapas.
I've never done comics before so I'm learning as I go along. ^^;
Great result here ! Really like the shift in colors and the different scene intensity ! Really nice !
