feedback
3mo
Nick Lyre
Hello everyone,
so I'm working on this piece and would love to get some suggestions and advises on how to improve it. Main things that I would love to get feedback on:
1. how to better render the mirror that the younger one is holding in her hand
2. the dress on the older girl
3. what light shape to make around the hand that holds the mirror
3mo
Ok, first off, I gotta say, I love how painterly this looks and how you mix all sorts of delightful colors together.
I might darken her hip behind the hand holding the mirror, to help the hand stand out and since the light seems to be coming from an angle that would push the younger girl’s shadow that way. For the mirror, maybe use a yellower highlight on it and lighten up the background behind it so you can see it more fully (maybe there can be a washcloth hanging up behind her or something?). As for the light shape on the hand…I might have her fingers wrapping all the way around it and put some highlights on them…but I feel like that critique is out of my league lol
Nick Lyre
3mo
thank you very much. agree, will work on it