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demetrius harris
what should i do to make these pop! how much more detail etc
Hey Demetrius,
Actually your drawings don't need more detail, The detail you have is actually hurting your drawings.
In the first drawing there is so much detail that nothing stands out. It looks like a big gray scribble. It took me a while to realize there was a character back there.
In the second drawing the guys left hand is buried in the detail of the guys arm and body, and the woman behind him is missing her right leg.
In the third drawing Spiderman is getting completely lost in all the detail of the hulk.
What makes a character pop is not the amount of detail, its the area of greatest contrast. Contrast in line weight, texture, dark vs light, detail vs lack of detail. filling the page up with massive amounts of detail makes everything look the same and you loose clarity. When everything stands out, then nothing stands out.
I hope you find this helpful :)
the lady leg is bhind his head n his body its suppose be like she has her leg in his back i can darken her knee n leg so as to it can b seen.. n invincible characarter i was using his arm as a form of for shorting..n 3rd pic the hulk spidey i made spidey kinda as to show he's closer to coming off page that y i made him bigger.. and what about the forth drawing can u give me any thought on 4th one u only said something about 3 pic sry now i got ur break down n order hope n my explanation made the picture make sense a lil and what i was going after.. well can u tell me what page i should study r point me n right direction of what will help me to what ur tlkn about n thanks for info so who do i do 2 correct what i was shooting for
well i did make man thing kinda like that because he's suppose to blend into the back ground if that makes sense should i darken the lines around his whole body? thanx for the feed back
