Through working on this assignment, I realized there are many things I need to study. The teacher's explanations while drawing helped me learn the thought processes necessary for creating artwork. However, both of my drawings ended up looking nothing like the model. I want to improve my ability to capture proportions accurately. Additionally, I found it very challenging to differentiate values, so I need to practice more to get better at this. Although I painted carefully, the result still looks uneven and messy. Therefore, I also want to practice hatching to achieve smoother and cleaner strokes. I would appreciate any feedback you could provide.

こんにちは。デモを見る前の最初の課題です。よろしくお願いします。 My first two attempts at the level 1 pear before watching the demo.