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@tjnis
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3yr
added comment inPortrait In Graphite feels off, Critique/Advice appreciated
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Your critique/advice is apparite
Squirrel Wallnut
3yr
How to submit artworks?
Lawrence Basso
3yr
I think @lorunox is right - the pupil placement is a bit off. Also, the lack of highlight on the eyeball is throwing me. Our eyes are very wet and reflective. Not seeing a specular highlight makes the eye seem dead... unless that's what you're going for. Otherwise, I'm diggin' it. Nice job.
@lorunox
3yr
I think the pupil is a bit off center, but otherwise it's great. I think you just looked at it for too long
Christopher Alaimo
3yr
I like it!
Asked for help
I'm new with graphite...
I like the drappery/texture of the shirt, it looks real and cool. The perspective on the hand and right part of the face feels off to me...
https://media.istockphoto.com/photos/closeup-side-profile-of-man-looking-down-picture-id483297190
i think that right part of the frontal part of the skull shouldnt be showing or its something about the eyesockets not wraping around the "head sphere"... i cant pin point exactly what it is.
Maybe this could help you to search the angle you want and see if it is accurate:
https://sketchfab.com/3d-models/low-poly-female-head-dadf7c8157b14a378c7911c0edf0857e
You dont have to download/buy the model, just rotate it in your browser (i use firefox).