I think @lorunox is right - the pupil placement is a bit off. Also, the lack of highlight on the eyeball is throwing me. Our eyes are very wet and reflective. Not seeing a specular highlight makes the eye seem dead... unless that's what you're going for. Otherwise, I'm diggin' it. Nice job.
I like it - looks like an unusual pose for a drawing! :) Anything specific you need help with? (figure, textures, construction...?)
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