My second upload now that I've had a chance to watch Stan's demo. Pinched pear on the left was pre-demo, the one on the right after having watched the demo. I tried to incorporate some feedback regarding the edges of my shapes from my previous post, but feel I need to get the knack for it still. Any feedback appreciated. :)

Hello. It's my first upload my drawing here. I wanted to have a job related with drawing 20 years ago but I lost my confident so I gave up. Even though I'm having a different job, drawing is still my kind of hobby so I want to be good at it. I already had a lot of trying and giving up many times before but I'll try again and be patient to keep going. It was really hard for me to draw lesser dark value and lesser white value. But it was interesting experience. I hope I can get advice about the drawing. Thanks.