suyash shenai
india
i am artist and my aspiration is to be a animator and a comic book artist
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suyash shenai
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4yr
added comment inAnatomy Critiques – The Spine
so i did the spine assignment of drawing skelly and it was very tricky i still struggle with getting the proportions right and i screw up the cervical spines size and the placement of the sacral and lumbar in the pelvis i think if i practice enough it will improve but any suggestions on how to do it and any critique or feedback of any other problem you notice will be very helpful and i will forever be bound to indentured servitude to whoever does help me :))
João Bogo
4yr
Dude...first, turn down the drama a little. You don't need to be forever bound to indentured servitude to anyone. 😂
the main problems with your drawing are proportions and structure, and for each one we will address differently.
For your proportions problems you need measuring. Use plumb lines, compare angles, shapes, etc. If you're still shaky in your measuring techniques review this proko's lesson:
https://www.proko.com/course-lesson/measuring-techniques/notes
It will help a lot. If you need even more help with this concepts you can try Dorian Item's accuracy guide. You can find it in the proko store inside his course "Drawing Fundamentals: Accuracy, Values, & Light" or if you're in a tight budget you can go to his gumroad page and buy it separately. It's very affordable and it's worth it. But again you'll be fine with just the proko free video.
About structure, I feel that you are not quite understanding the 3d forms of the pelvis and rib cage. You can watch (or re-watch) their lessons and try this exercise again or you can substitute them for boxes, It'll make it easier to visualize them in space.
But right now, work on your measuring. I feel that's what gonna benefit you the most in this moment.
Best regards
suyash shenai
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4yr
So this is my second attempt of the assignment which I did after watching the critique I think I improved a lot the second time around but I need more practice to improve any tips on the area I can improve will be appreciated
suyash shenai
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4yr
Asked for help
I feel kinda stuck in gesture drawing and don't understand how to improve my studies specifically I feel my gesture lack a sense of weight they look like they are floating how do I improve in that area amy feed back and critique will be helpful
Casey Holtz
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4yr
Asked for help
30 second and 2 minute poses! Any critique welcome but especially appreciate advice for the boy buns - I feel like I always make the pelvis too small and/or end up with extraneous/disruptive lines near the glutes on male figures. (See the hanging pose near top left, the pose with two blocks, ladder pose, and bottom right.)
I love how clean your gestures are i always end up making mine messy..as far as the pelvis is concerned I think practicing bean and the robo bean will be real valuable as it will give you an idea of how to place the pelvis and help with making it more proportional
suyash shenai
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4yr
Asked for help
These are my joint assignment any critique or feedback on how to improve will be appreciated
suyash shenai
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4yr
did the anatomy tracing assignment today i have practiced some torso muscles so i had some idea on how to trace it but still it was very challenging to do but it was fun. feedback and critique is welcome
It's ok for what it is.
This exercise is designed to test your knowledge of anatomy. I would like to suggest you to review each section of the anatomy course and then try this again, because a lot of the muscle fibers are pointing to the wrong way.
To make it better you can also try to make it more clear by identifying what is bone, muscle fiber or tendon.
Best regards
