After watching the demo and critique I tried the second pear. On the first pear I had done a lot of mistakes that were shown in the critique video. Like outlining or lazy shading. Outline: I got the outlines again, but I erased the form before I started shading. I need to learn to sketch lighter. Shading: I still have problems chosing good shades. My lighter shadow looks a lot like my darker "normal" shade. I have also the habit of turning my pencil if the tip gets dull and then you can see the difference. Now I try to turn my pencil if I have finished a plane.

My first pear without watching the demo. I will do another one tomorrow. Shading that thing was really annoying.