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@soeybean
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4yr
added comment inLower Back Assignment Example 6
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Hi! Can I get some feedbacks on the below study please? Watched the critique video and fixed things that I could spot but I still feel like there's something off in there.. Any help would be greatly appreciated here.
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4yr
@soeybean Awesome work! The shading looks solid and very pleasing visually, the muscular anatomy looks right on spot, and I actually can feel a nice sense of gesture on the muscles on her right side. Great job!
If you allow one piece of suggestion: I wouldn't skip the spine on the construction sketch - it is such an important and structural part of the body I think it's always helpful to keep track of where it is and how it looks underneath the surface, especially since it's a lower back study and most lower back muscles attach to it.
Hope this helps!