Any critiques about anything on these gestures would be appreciated. I realize I didn't really push the pose on the left.

First, make sure you work out the figure properly before starting on the clothing, the right leg looks disconnected from the body and its too long. Also make sure you add gesture to the hair because it looks stiff. Then, add the clothing and wrinkles to wrap around the shapes to make them look dimensional, and to show perspective. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, and to show you how to simplify the clothing so that it reads more clearly :)

This is my final assignment for the head drawing and construction course. I did the five drawings from the previous one and the five new ones. I did some basic shading because why not? I still need a lot of practice but I feel like this class sent me on the right path. I love Michael's teaching and I feel I have improved drawing the head. Most importantly, as I got further into each lesson, I understood that the method is awesome for inventions. (You could have a construction from one reference and change the features and lighting and design something different) If you can read this and have not taken this course, don't hesitate.