So the first image is actually my first attempt before watching the video. I think it looks better than the video follow along, but I think the reason for that is because I payed attention to the gesture of the model for my first attempt and then tried to add detail, while with the second attempt(following along with the video) I was mostly copying all Stan's lines, so it looks stiff and the pose is wrong. Still struggling with some of the limb placement, but practice makes perfect I guess. Advice appreciated😁

Right so the first image is my first attempt of course, and the second is after I watched the video. What I notice is that for the first one it's REALLY stiff and looks all just... weird, while with the second one I was sure to work on the actual gesture first. But with the second, I now notice the placement of the arms was a little off. Maybe one day I'll achieve placement AND gesture🥲 Any advice appreciated❤️

Any criticisms would be extremely appreciated🙏🙏 p.s. I know the lines are SUPER sketchy which may make it a little confusing😅😅

Hehehehe I know this is super hard to look at and super sketchy (which is totally the opposite of the clean lines we’re meant to use) but I was hoping for some feedback nonetheless. p.s pink is the landmarks I tried to use, and obviously there isn’t many cause I kinda struggled to grasp this lesson😂😂 anyway, any feedback would be extremely appreciated🙏🙏