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Jo Edgehill
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3yr
added comment inCritique please :)
Here's my attempt to fix it a bit (I also added in some color haha) .
Caleb Omusi
3yr
Nice job adding colours! I like your choices. If you are still open to some constructive criticism, I think the perspective of the hands and the guns and the hands holding them could be improved. Maybe practicing simple boxes in perspective and foreshortening might help.