Here is my final submissions , it was really a fun challenge ,didn't have enough time though

Hi, my name is Nikol, and I would love to hear your thoughts on my art. I'd love to know what you like, don't like, how I can push it further, etc, and how I can be a better and more well rounded competitive candidate for industry work. What jobs I should be applying to based on my body of work? My niche from my current portfolio is more of an illustrative / 2D generalist sort of role, with a specialty in fantasy art, creatures, painting, and figures, but I want to do anything and everything my skillset is suited toward, and take a big interest in painting, illustration, concept art and vis dev, working more with Zbrush, etc and just love jumping into challenges and learning new things and making friends along the way, but I feel like my portfolio is not yet a strong concept / vis dev and entertainment design portfolio to really confidently apply to jobs that will get my foot in that big industry job door. I am about to start hunting for jobs again while I've been working as an art teacher and studio manager at a local art studio since Dec 2020, and am seeking any advice and suggestions on how to apply to work and what to keep expanding upon and working on in my portfolio that will get me where you think I need to go. I want a stable creative 9-5 job with benefits and a salary, now its a matter of the steps to get there. Thanks so much for taking the time to read this, and thanks so much for this opportunity for feedback. Big lizard man at the end is my ZBrush Final after just 1 semester of it, and I unfortunately have not touched it since (but have dreamed to and now am too intimidated to touch it again). Hope to hear from you soon! More of my art here: https://www.instagram.com/prismaticvixen/

Here's my critter entry! I know the requirement was for a sketch, so included is my sketch / work I had completed within Peter Han's two hour stream, along with my more noodley detailed iteration to get it to a nicer finish. Combined the Lemur, Bird, Beetle, and Grasshopper. Would love any feedback to push my skills. :) Thanks for your consideration! Process video on instagram: https://www.instagram.com/p/CTskPWFhPlA/