Activity Feed
Nyx
•
4yr
added comment inNeed some critique for this pose!!
First I want to say I am a big fan of the colors and the composition!
I think it might be because her left shoulder and her left side of the hip are both raised. I don't remember the term for it, but a pose looks generally more dynamic when the lines of the shoulder and the hips are not parallel to each other, if that makes any sense.
Maybe raising the right shoulder and lowering the left one could make it more dynamic.
I hope this helps :)
Asked for help
Hey team! Please critique my work. I wanna get better
This looks so good! I think you could benefit from exaggerating the darkness of the core shadows even more. It looks really solid, I like it!
Asked for help
I really enjoyed this approach! This is my first time here on Proko, so I'm very excited. Any critique would be greatly appreciated!
I agree with the other comments. Very good control of face values. This was quite a tricky pose but you were able to solve it quite well.
This is very cool, great unique style. Immediately evokes feeling of a heroine in an animated movie. Great job.
I think this is great! I feel that the nose should be a little bit bigger so it lines up with the rightmost corner of her right eye (to us it’s the left eye). How long did this take to draw?
Your proportions look V.good it would be dramatic( impactful ) to see it in darker shadows. It's so nice that I want to edit to see it with darker shadows. HaHa if I have your permission.
