Hi @joseph12, nice drawing! I really like how to contour clearly shows the plane changes; bottom plane for the brows -> up plane of nose bridge -> down plane for the ball of the nose. It makes the drawing look more solid! I'll do my best to help you further: - I can see that you first started with lightly drawing the loomis head. That's great! But the construction seems to be a little off. Since this is a profile view, the side plane of the skull should be a circle; in yours it's oval. Maybe this happened because you rushed into the stage of drawing the details. If that's the case, slow down a little and make sure that the loomis head foundation is correct. It will pay off :) - The brows and the hairline don't seem to relate correctly to the guidelines on the loomis head. The brows should land on the horizontal line running through the center of the ball, and the hair line's mid point (the one that peaks down like the middle of an "M" on the centerline of the face) lands on roughly the horizontal line that interesects the top of the circle on the cranium. Hope this helps :) Keep up the good work!

He’s fine. He just needs some iris showing. Looks like you just have the pupils and they need to be centered. 👀🙄