Looks nice overall. Remember to use nice loose confident strokes and just work on capturing the rhythms of the forms. Think long flowing strokes from your arm and shoulder and not your fingers.

You did a really great job simplifying the shapes. This is something I personally struggle with greatly, so nice job. The two biggest things that stand out to me are that your 2nd shadow tone and your darker mid-tone look two close together, so it looks like you only have 4 values instead of 5. The other thing is that it looks like you rushed on your shading... were you shading using the side of your pencil? I can see the difference in the strokes you used in your pear versus the lines you made on the top of your page. You want to use those instead.