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Giuliano Lo Bartolo
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11mo
Asked for help
Hello everyone, recently I started drawing again after a long pause (procrastination hitted very hard). I somehow got inspired to draw this somewhat surreal "Bonsaisnail" with coal and pencil. Even though I'm very proud about it, I think that something is still missing. Especially the little tree. Is the shading off? And what is your general opinion? Happy for any comments :)
Just for fun I put a little waspnest in my skull where my TV stands. Well....lets say it got me inspired for this #prokochallenge
Giuliano Lo Bartolo
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3yr
The shapes and colors look all right for me. But what I would do ist to get rid of all these little white spots that shine through so it doesn't look as sketchy and could help to convey realism.
Sincerely, Giuliano
Giuliano Lo Bartolo
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3yr
I had some ink to spare so I used it to make this quick "watercolor" of a skull :)
Giuliano Lo Bartolo
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3yr
1. Do you know what's happening?
Yes definitely. It was really easy to read for me. That you added no dialogue is not a problem at all. The kind of comic you tried is its own category of pictorial story, so its ok :)
2. Is it boring?
Definitely not, its really funny.
On the composition: Its nice to see that not every panel is the same. But I would say, try that all panels are in the same area. You should look for a "border" were all panels stop. Looks cleaner
3. Do you have any emotional reaction looking through it?
I found it mostly funny but it got definitely a creepy vibe to it
PS. Criticism is definitely not there for hurting someones feeling! And dont expect to hear that you suck. We are all learners here so "sucking" is just the part of the learning process. Also this kind of negative feeling doesnt let you look good and even makes you feel worse. Hope I didnt get too personal.
Sincerely,
Giuliano
Hi, first of all: Its a very nice sketch!
But there are some flaws in anatomy and perspective (dont worry its not something utterly serious). Your perspective with the neck and the muscles that attach to the clavicle doesnt match the rotation of the torso. The clavicles point to the viewer, while the torso points to the right side. Its not much, but the right arm is a bit too large compared to the other arm. And to the horns in the hair: They dont attach to the head on the same point if thats what you were after, also they dont quite have the same hight. Hope I wasnt too nitpicky and hope I could help :)
Sincerely,
Giuliano
Giuliano Lo Bartolo
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3yr
I think it could be the part of the trapezius muscle that attaches to the scapula. It could look that weird, because the scapula pokes out and pushes this part to look that way. But I'm really not sure. Hope this helps anyway ;)
I agree with @Giuliano Lo Bartolo and @Stan Prokopenko.
In my opinion the answer is "Both". Just there the middle portion of trapezius overlaps the spine of the scapula where it emerges from the medial edge of the shoulder blade. That bump is kind of a mix of bone and muscle.
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3yr
Yup I agree. To me that looks like the middle portion of the traps.
Hello! Here is my entry for the challenge ))
Hi this is my artwork for the challenge.... a deep sea samurai. Hope you all like it😊
Here is my take on the challenge! It was a lot of fun!
