larger brush helps me do this less. I liked your negative painting around the bird.

Helpful points on brushes. What do you think of the hake brush for washes? It does seem like your multi-brush will hold more water than my hake, but I do like using one.

Maybe lower his eyes a bit so they're closer in line with top of his ears? Also thin the jaw. Perhaps use the first chin as bottom of beard. This is hard reference photo as he is jutting his chin forward and also looking down slightly.

Good effort. Neck is too thick. I still like it!