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@blueeyedtiger12
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11d
added comment inFigure Drawing Critiques - Gesture
Hello,
This is my first post on Proko, so hopefully I'm posting in the right place. I've been watching/studying the gesture lessons, trying to better grasp the concepts. I think I'm getting the hang of it as I go but am sure I'm missing something.
Any criticism and/or advice would be greatly appreciated. 🙏
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11d
Welcome :) It definitely looks like you're grasping the idea of gesture here. Your drawings have really great flow. You have a knack for gesture it seems like.
I think an area you can work on is getting more control over your use of line. Sketchy lines are great for gesture drawing and encouraged so you stay loose, but in some moments here it feels like you lost direction a bit and compensated with repetitive lines. Try to stay very conscious and intentional with the lines that you use and start out lightly so you can build up the lines that are correct and let the irrelevant ones fade away.
Really great job with these @blueeyedtiger12! I'm looking forward to seeing more :)