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10mo
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My longest figure drawing ever, it took 10 hours. Still can’t believe I actually did it.
Some mistake lines couldn’t be erased completely, so they do show up in some areas. Though I tried to spot my mistakes and correct them in the layin stages, I didn’t notice a glaring mistake in the position of the hips until the rendering stage. I would love to be able to spot more mistakes earlier on, perhaps it gets better with practice.
Any critiques would be much appreciated!
Thank you Stan for making such a wonderful course, I will definitely miss hearing that catchy intro.
Andy King
10mo
Well done Faye, sitting with the same image for 10 hours is tough, something to be proud of by itself. I'd say your proportions look pretty good to me. The head is possibly on the small side - that's an error I often make so it's easy to spot in other peoples work! Biggest area to work on is the rendering I think, the ribs jump out as a focal point because of the contrast (which I assume is unintentional). Whereas in the reference the values look more subtle. The value transitions in the face look like they could do with more subtly too - the cheek bone in particular jumps out. Otherwise, I think you've done great. Congratz!
