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Posting Biceps assignment.Any critique is appreciated.
@aishwarya_b
I know I did draw a lot. This is one Lesson and assignment I have spent a lot of time on. And I still am making mistakes. Any feedback much appreciated.
@aishwarya_b
All and any feedback much appreciated.
@aishwarya_b
This my assignment for this lesson.
Jesper Axelsson
I think these are really good! - I would add just a little more volume to the breasts. They feel a little flat compared to the reference. If you don't want to draw crosscontour lines around the breast, you can use the nipple to clarify it's volume; the nipple is kinda at the apex of the form (misplacing it can cause the breast to look flatter). Hope this helps :)
@aishwarya_b
Some of them feel off to me. And I didn't watch the examples yet.
Jesper Axelsson
These look great! -In the middle left one, the insertion on the relaxed arm, seems to be too high up, compared to the skelly below. You also seemed to have missed a tiny sliver on the pec of the elevated arm (marked with blue) - In the center one, I think you missed a tiny sliver of pecs on one side (marked with blue) Hope this helps :)
@aishwarya_b
A page of buckets. Any feedback much appreciated!
Jesper Axelsson
Hi @aishwarya_b, nice studies! Great idea to get comfortable with the buckets first. Your drawings are solid and will make a good foundation for the details! - The only thing that looks incorrect is the intersection plane that connects the sacrum and the pubic crest. Before throwing in the ellipse, start by marking out the points where you know it intersects (the halfway mark at the pubis and the 1/3 mark at the sacrum). - I think you would appreciate reading this critique https://www.proko.com/s/NkCt. The bucket is a little tricky to draw since the end caps aren't perfect circles. Looking at your drawings you seem to be doing fine, but I just wanted throw this in in case you've struggled with it. Hope this helps :)
@aishwarya_b
Hello all, Any feedback is much appreciated. Sometimes I really fail to see my shortcomings.
João Bogo
3yr
Hey, aishwarya_b Mostly these are well-done. They feel solid and the line quality is ok. Even though there are improvements to be made, as far as the spine is concerned, I think you got the main concepts. However, if you want a little direction on what you should work now, I would start with measuring. I feel that when stuff goes in perspective you're not getting the dimensions right. The first exercise is an example. Compare the size of the externum in the picture and in your drawing. Yours is bigger. I also think that you're having difficulties with the opening of the rib cage and relating one side to another. So study (or review) carefully the rib cage section. Same thing concerning the pelvis, I don't think you're getting the tilt of the bucket right. So study (or review) the pelvis section and try this exercise again. Keep drawing and Best regards
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