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Caleb
I recently started an online store last month to try and sell my designs. This isn't an ad so don't click away yet, this is my latest design that I will be releasing on May 1st. Before the listing is live I would like to ask you to critique this work. I don't have a drawing screen and didn't want it to be overly detailed like a comic, but I would still like feedback with that in mind if you would be so kind.
Hey Caleb,
I think what would help your drawing would be to do an under drawing to make sure your anatomy is working. Also, try to use more flowing lines in the hair as well as coloring your lines to make them feel more subtle. I did a quick sketch to show you what I mean, I hope it helps :)
That for sure helps!
I don't own a tablet so I can't easily fix the design, but I should be able to remove and transform any excess or overly-straight lines in the hair with Photoshop. My current process for these is making the line art on paper with ink, upping the exposure to hide any graphite smears from the sketch and isolate the lines, and import the line art into Photoshop. It won't be easy but I can for sure try and update the anatomy with the available tools.
Thanks for the help, Steve!
