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random doodles... where am i lacking?
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RItesh Dhande
shading? line work? structure?? what can i do to improve my drawing?? please help
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Gavin Beck
3yr
Maybe have the characters interacting somehow. Like simply looking at each other or something might make come to life a little bit. Maybe the black and white character and the bald character is looking at the blue character because the blue character looks sad. Not to sure but looks great!
RItesh Dhande
thanks for ur help... i wont do this mistake again
RItesh Dhande
yaah it is looking messy and not interacting... and yeah i made that blue character sad...
DoodleMick
3yr
I agree with what Andaries said, plus I would also include a neck of some sort. I know these are Doodles, but a simple neck would really solidify the sketch in my opinion. This kind of looks like a watercolor affect, and with that, the edges around the chin and very messy, and should be cleaned up a bit. Other then that, I really like what you have done here. Keep up the good work.
RItesh Dhande
thank you!! next time i will sure go for neck maybe till pit of throat... thank you once again!!
@andaries
3yr
I think they really turned out great, there is some room for improvement though. You are using a relativlely stylized form of drawing, what would help in giving a bit more character is changing up the form a bit. The chins of all of these persons are looking very similar, maybe try some bulkier, thinner, rounder, sharper etc... Apart from that I noticed that the placement of the facial features is a bit off sometimes, I know that these are caricatures, but giving them some level of form will really help making them look more believable. But I am a real fan of the shading, especially on the middle one and the facial expressions all look very sincere and different, a lot of people like myself have the "dead expression" problem, so kudos to you! ^^
RItesh Dhande
thanks a lot!! i will make a structure before actaully jumping directly into the drawings... so i can get facial features better placed... and will try some more styles and variations!! thanks for ur review... it helped me a lot :)
Aline Fouard
Depends on your goals... where do you wanna go with your art?
RItesh Dhande
its just a time pass thing... a little drawing before going to bed... each face is like no more than 5min
Sketcher Ameya
I think 1st one is reaaly good
RItesh Dhande
thank you :)
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