I like how you picked such a difficult subject for your first drawing from imagination. It shows that you're really pushing yourself. There's two things that immediately jump to mind that I think could help you for next time. The first is the hair. I'm not an expert at hair at all, I find it difficult still. The best advise I can give is rather than approaching the hair as one whole shape and going in to define individual strands afterward is to approach it as a series of different shapes that make up the whole. Angel Ganev has a really good way of showing this, heres a video link (https://youtu.be/ClAMuGEfFNM) The second is the hips on the front character. Womens hips are higher up then mens and are also tilted at a more severe angle (this is what makes a woman's bum poke out more than a mans). Female hips are basically just a big bone bowl to hold a growing baby in place. On your picture the widest part doesn't start until after the public mound which isn't correct. When drawing women basically as soon as you go in at your smallest part of the waist you need to start bringing that line back out for the hips. Aaron Blaise explains it a lot better than I can in his human anatomy course. I've put a reference picture in a different pose just so you can see where the hips width is in relation to the tops of the thighs and the waist. Hope this helps!

Hi ✌😁 there Christopher Alaimo. my name is JDN short for Jadon. so i just went through all of you're work to get a better understanding of you're art as a hole and to see where i can offer any of my knowledge . see ive seen you're art but i have to get a even better understanding of it myself that is or at least that's the way i see it anyway. with that said. i can see a lot of good progress as it is . that you have made compared to just making marks. from the point to where any artist will always begin at now as i said before i do want to re look over all of the art that you have posted so that i can get a better understanding of what you have best as it stands . and what needs a larger amount of work before you get better . you know what im saying ? 😄 ok . so my stock advice is from what i gathered is 1st to observe. which means look around you think watch the best of the best and realize that they were where you are right now in some way shape or form and use that to your advantage . and some times try to get a understanding of they way they see what it is that they see . and try to practice a bit of it here and there to see how far you can get. . 2st to practice which means repetition over and over again. and i feel that even though it looks horrible most of the time. 😄 i cant believe im saying this but its totally worth saving every bit of it even if you think that it looks like trash and nothing else its worth it because later when you get burn out from all this work. its when and only when you look at you're own art work that you see how far you have really come trust me if you take anything away from this at all SAVE ALL OF YOU'RE ART please and thank you . you will not believe it when you it latter on 👌😉 3d never let anything make you think that you're art is just bad its not even when you know that you could have done better. but you didn't even though it seems like you failed . let me reassure you that just because you slip up once in awhile . it dose not mean you are done. its just apart of learning . you must fall first in order to be able to get back up again right ? . the only way you get better at any skill such as art is to make mistakes . art is a skill not a talent remember that. 4th you are who you are so dont think that you have to change who you are at the core just to get better. its not hard to think that you are the problem when you are told that you're art is ok or that it could be better. you make the art that you make not because its a part of you but you make the art that you make as a representation of you're personal perspective . and you're self maybe a thought that you had. a image a story a emotion a dream anything. the thing is that its how you see it. that's what makes everybody's art unique in its own way at the end of the day.. which adds value to you're art work as a hole no matter what . and 5th . being me telling you . that i am not the best artist ever and i might never be i am not the smartest person ever . but with all of that said . i dont need to be . to know these things and neither do you. nor anybody else. and being an artist means never ending learning and expanding upon what you already know. all artists are always learning new things rather if its things like learning a new short cut new ways of creating there art or just new ideas in general even the best of the best we are all stuck for ever in this loop of learning with everything witch i think is kind of funny 😂 we are all students. so just remember that its ok if you dont learn as fast as others we all have our own flow in witch we do our thing . and that's my advice to you or to anybody that is curious. i hope that this helps please let me know when you get the chance if you did or what you're thoughts are i love to see what others have to say always . god bless and take care 😉✌