Minimalist painting - critique request
3yr
Hank Macleod
I wanted to create a minimalist, graphic version of this ristra as part of a commissioned illustration to promote a New Mexico organization on social media. I generally don't do this style of art, but I would like to do more of it. I want to know if the idea could be communicated better, if it could be simplified, and above all, how to make it more striking to the eye. Thank you!
Hi! I like the way you are moving. I think as it is it's good for a background prop, but I'd add a third more darker tone to define the form of individual parts better. Right now it looks more like a unified object to me (In my opinion). Hope it helps)
