Gesture feedback/ crits
3yr
Christopher Lebreault
Hello Community! I would really some feedback on these gestures. They were 1 min; 2 min; and 5 min poses
thank you!
Hey Christopher! Nice work on completing some gesture drawings.
One suggestion I might make is to use a darker pencil next time or maybe scan your images in. As they are, it is a bit difficult to see the drawings, in my opinion.
Another suggestion I might make is to simplify your lines. Try to confidently use as few lines as necessary to describe the figure and resist the temptation to go back in over the lines over and over again. A confident line that is a little bit off usually looks better than many scratchy lines.
Hope this helps!
that helps alot! Part of the messyness is that the lines were too light even for me and I was trying to darken (i'd 25% blame goes to that) but I notice when under pressure I do that as well. I will try to leave the line alone once placed down. Maybe Ill make things I like dark after my session
