Figure drawing
4yr

valerio
Critique please
Hi @Valerio Pilotti ,
Great stuff!
Some feedback that comes to mind first (looking at the first page), is to keep checking the proportions. To name some examples: in the two drawings above, her ribcage feels quite large compared to her pelvis. Her head feels a bit too small, same for her arms, they look quite thin, especially in the first and fourth drawing.
Keep it up!
-Leon