Hi @steven clarke , Great drawings you have here! I really like the one with the birds. My thoughts would be that the head size in the first and fourth drawing looks a bit undersized. Maybe try to catch those proportional issues before going into detail. Another thing that may just be a personal preference thing, but I feel like keeping the backkgound color so dark with very thin line work makes it quite difficult to see the drawings themself. Maybe try lightening up your background colors a bit before posting so that the drawings are easier to read immediately.

awesome!

Did you do these from imagination or do you use reference? My main comment would be that it looks like you draw focused on contour and less on 3D forms. Try to make sure the volumes make sense and not just contours.

Woww these are so interesting! I particularly like the middle two! I find the bum on the 4th one a bit distractingly large and protruding from the legs because of the dark line to the side and cast shadow underneath but maybe the attention is to draw the eye! Great work - I would love to see more.

Oh! Nice! I really like the dancer whit birds!!! It is possible in the first image the head is a bit too small?