Character Design Critique - Yellow Apatite Warrior
3yr
Steve Reaume
Hello again, humans,
I'm looking for your thoughts on this design.
Description: I call him a Yellow Apatite Warrior, a human who uses neuronal enhancements provided by the crystals in his armour to gain strategic advantage. They allow his brain to process information more quickly and his body to react to future events before they occur. These guys would be clever, quick-thinking fighters who always have a plan in battle. Mostly, they'd act as leaders on the battlefield or elite guards, intimidating and calculating.
I lack experience with armour designs, so that's definitely an area I'd be interested in learning about from you guys, but any other critique is welcome too.
Hey Steve,
Cool drawing, I like the idea behind it. I think you could benefit from doing a good structural drawing first, then building your design on top. Make sure all the anatomy and proportions are right before moving on. Also make sure, despite the design, that you find ways to show perspective with the armor or clothing. I did a drawing that I hope will help, keep it up :)
