i dont feel like you are showing the curve of the spine enough , try to exagerrate the gesture while drawing its agood practice ,

hands are too long, and critique my drawing query which i have uploaded

the gesture feels off , specialy at the torso

Hello again @desmond68, Before I apply any feedback I may have, I want to ask, what kind of feedback are you looking for? What do you already know is off about the gesture? What would you like clarity on? I ask this because in order to provide proper critique, it helps to understand what the feedback is meant to do or assist with. I don't want to point something out you may already be aware of.