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@zlojkrokodil
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2yr
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Hello! Had a lot of fun with this, even if the forms of the charakters could be bit more expressive. Also I'm bit struggling with the poses, now they feel a bit random. But still a very cool task, thank you!
Andrew Schlageter
2yr
I enjoy your style of line. It feels unrestrained and animate. I think that plays strongly in the gesture of your leader, as I can feel her confidence. I was a bit confused identifying the other two, until I looked closer at your peace keeper's clothing. I might encourage you, in the future, to experiment more with gesture and expression as that is working naturally in your outgoing leader but starts to lose identity in your other two characters. Your rhythm doesn't seem to doubt itself, which naturally works great with aggressive characters, but the other two prompts have gradually opposing mannerisms to that. It may benefit you to start thinking about how this style can demonstrate a character with more reservation or constriction. As for your shape breakdown, you certainly have a great start. Your clothing flows from form to form while remaining separate, details are compositionally great and articulate. I can certainly see the conflicting nature in your peace keeper with his breakdown alone.