I am very late but i have some critique. If u dont want any just ignore this lol I recommend practicing eyes and mouth anatomy n stuff. Sinix Designs has lots and lots of anatomy tutorials that can help! Also, move the cheek shading up (if the shading is for the cheek) The cheek bone remains near the point of your nose (kinda above nostrils) and just moving it up a tad bit would make it much more better! Good luck on ur art journey, and never give up <3