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Ryan
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3yr
added comment inProko Challenge Storytelling - FINAL SUBMISSIONS HERE
Hello! Here is my submission for the contest. Hope you all enjoy it!
Side Shave Laura
3yr
Ha! Love the chameleon! Nice work!
Madelyn Kuipers
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3yr
Asked for help
Assignment 02 - Creating
Much more difficult than the first assignment! Figuring out how the muscles would look depending on how large you make them was a trip! Critiques and feedback welcome and appreciated!
Hi Madelyn, I'll try and provide some feedback for you. The color variation helps a lot in seeing the 3 different sections.
- In general, I'm seeing the sternal, and abdominal parts not have a bulge towards the armpit. They don't feel like they have the correct volume. Proko mentions the bulge having most of the mass of the muscle.
- In all but #2, the left arms are closer to the body, so they will squish the pecs more. Again, the volume in those feels flat. #4 is getting there, with some c-curves in there indicating volume.
- #2 had the same mistake I made. The pecs can arc up more. The clavicular portion can go high enough to obscure the clavicle bone. And the lower 2 sections would mimic the rib cage's arc a bit, before turning up to their insertion, which will be a pretty foreshortened line.
Good effort! And hope this helps!